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Its a really good start, I love the melody. The background needs more work. It's too quiet, there's not enough going on really. There should be something there, even toned down background, just so there isn't empty space.
My favorite part, and I would love to see you elaborate on this, starts at 00:55 and ends at 01:55. For that minute, it's GOLDEN. The end gets kind of confusing, and it kind of crosses over from trance at the beginning of the song to more of a dance song at the end... I would love to hear a straight trance version. 02:45 til 03:15 is also really good. It fades out nicely.
I'd really love to hear more of this and will check back to see if you've changed or developed it more. Good start tho.
8/10 4/5
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You did SUCH a good job remaking this song. I love the trace vibe from it, the synths are really great and I dunno... Everything about it. You really outdid yourself. The time and effort you put into it defintiely shows. You should really be proud of yourself with this. It's really mellow and fun, gets me humming and nodding my head the whole way through, and keeps my attention. It even loops well hahaha.
Great job, 5/5 10/10
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Thx, im glad at least ur showing the approval i want ;D
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5/5, 10/10
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lols word.
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I have no constructive criticism, or helpful words of wisdom to say here. Just... WERD. Thanks for this xD
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<insert raving review here>
i wont even bother typing it out, we both know that i love it
Author's Response:
Cool, though actually, I think it's so-so. XD Thanks anyway for reviewing.
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I'm so glad you remixed this song... The remix is 1000000000000000 times better. Funny how this gives me a kind of.... 'rebuilding from the ashes' sort of feeling, whereas the remix gives me a 'GET THE FUCK UP AND DANCE' kinda feeling, lawl. *Now with corn
Author's Response:
Ha, yep, it is! :D The concept was good in this version, though in my opinion, a bit half-baked. Thanks for the review. :P
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I don't even like this genre much [uber picky] but this is a lot of what I was hoping you would do with the song. I'm waiting to hear the end, since the original's ending was...... "lackluster".
Uh oh... is that... it kinda sounds like it... ;[ Sigh. Still not what I was hoping you'd do with the song, but I still like it a lot. It's like the original mix on steroids hahaha... I should just start making music so I can show you what I mean haha :P
Be proud, homie; be proud.
Author's Response:
This song was a bit of a failure to me... I aimed at DnB and ended up with fast, distorted trance. XD
You know, if there's something you don't like in a song I make, he best thing you can do is tell me what it is, so I can fix it/not do it again... XD
Thanks anyway for the review. :P
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Is this song really that old?? Whoa. Anyway, this song kinda amused me. It's a reaaaaally different sound, and you either like it or you kinda wonder wtf you were thinking hahaha... In my case, a bit of both, but I actually really like it. The whole mood/atmosphere of the song is great. Kinda not a fan of where you took the ssong though.. The last minute I was kinda like 'ummm.....' It's got a lotta character tho, I like it. On to the remix!!!
Author's Response:
Ha, it's well over a year old! XD My very first was finished on December 30th, 2006, to put things in perspective. :P
How'd I miss this review, though? You submitted it yesterday... o_O Thanks anyway for reviewing, even though it's insanely old. ;D
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You should be doing more of THIS. It's a gem, and put together like a pro. Love the airy effects paired with the melodies and the percussion is good too. I might even come back and download this xD I'm REALLY waiting for Lost Forever to be finished though, that one is still my fave, and a strong contender for top 20 of all time even. 5'd/fav'd
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...then I'll prolly like it. He's right though, you do take your time with it, and it is a bit drony. I don't make music, so I try not to get too technical for fear of sounding like an unhelpful douchebag, but I dunno... something is just-- missing??
When I think of 'trance' I think of that semi-Euphoric state I get into when I listen to it that makes me just stop what I'm doing to listen. I didn't get that until about 5 mins in... The last minute is great, but the song up til then seems almost... dry... Do you know what I mean? It's kind of hard to explain when I can't put it into technical terms haha. Ok let me listen again...
Ok, the clap is really annoying (that's what she said hahahaha). It was good for the first minute or so, now it's just getting on my nerves. Or maybe the volume on it is just too loud... Oh there we go, it kinda faded out.. Ok, this is awesome now that the clap has faded out a bit... The lead has my attention but sounds kind of... *almost* predictable.
Euugh there's that damn clap again... at least turn down the volume!!! 4:26 is dope... Okay, so I'll change what I said earlier; from 4:26 til the end is freakin awesome. I dig it.
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